That's true. You are a bit of a
Dick.

nice line.

See. Superman wouldn't have spilled
boiling hot Coffee exactly on your
testicles.

very funny.

i like your style. great dialogue.

only minor quibble is:

Tell me the truth mate, are you
Superman?

sounds too british.
 

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Thanks Waring. It's very re-assuring you liked those lines, I sometimes worry that lines like that which aren't 'proper' jokes might fall flat to other people.

I agree with the British line sounding wrong, I've modified it in version 2. Although Coffee was changed back to Tea to make it a bit more British

V.2
http://www.shoepie.co.uk/archive/Superman-2.pdf


 

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perfect!
 

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Still like this one. Good stuff.

Dan
 

just suddenly had a delightful image of superman smashing wee jimmy's face in to silence him - just seemed so un-superman.
 

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Haha, I'll see if I can get some Jimmy abuse out-takes in for you. You can definitely have a lot of fun with a Superman costume.
 

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I usually like your stuff Mr Pie and this is no exception. But I much much much prefer version 1. I think it's much neater.