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Jude
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I've just used Danny's services for my latest horror screenplay and I have to say, he did an excellent job.

Danny made some great points, questioned things, offered suggestions and spotted some things I hadn't.

Highly recommended.
 
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I can also recommend Danny's services. He went through my sitcom script with a fine tooth comb, and pointed stuff out that I was probably too close to notice. Extremely helpful.

Thanks, Danny.
 
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Just got my drama script comments back last night and I was very impressed. It had a good balance of positives and negatives and has made me realise I need to focus on simplifying and clarifying the story as well as reducing the number of characters.

So all in all if you have a script to send don't hesitate.
 
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Hi guys,

Just want to say I'm really overwhelmed by the response to this and glad I am able to help people with this and a huge thank you.

I am gonna take a bit of a break from script reading for a moment because it has exceeded all expectations and not leaving a lot of time for writing of my own.

I will definitly return to it and gonna set up a website and everything as I enjoy it so much *COUGH* to any industry people reading... hehe...

Just want to say anyone who has scripts with me currently I WILL of course read them and endevour to have them back within 2 weeks.

Thanks again, you guys have been amazing.

Danny
 
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Yeah well done Danny. It's a lot harder reading scripts and giving people good feedback than it is to write a script I reckon!

So thanks again and best of luck with the writing and the script doctoring!

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Yes - Danny. Well done.

Maybe you should make a nominal charge although it could possibly get complicated.

But if you're doing this for people you want to get something out of it.
 
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My thanks also to Danny - he said lots of nice things and pointed out a couple of schoolboy errors. I feel far more encouraged having a stranger read my work and seem to approve over friends and family (who will just say nice things for fear of me hitting them), cheers Danny!
 
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I had Danny look at my script and he also provided excellent feedback. Also got back to me within a few days! Well worth using.

Also used Dave Cohen, who was excellent and well worth the investment.

As someone else mentioned it's great to get unbiased feedback.
 
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Yes, I'll second Dave Cohen as a script reader, he does a great job.
 
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Danny's done me a good job too. Well worth it. Cheers, Dan

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