I've just used Danny's services for my latest horror screenplay and I have to say, he did an excellent job.

Danny made some great points, questioned things, offered suggestions and spotted some things I hadn't.

Highly recommended.
 

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I can also recommend Danny's services. He went through my sitcom script with a fine tooth comb, and pointed stuff out that I was probably too close to notice. Extremely helpful.

Thanks, Danny.
 

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Just got my drama script comments back last night and I was very impressed. It had a good balance of positives and negatives and has made me realise I need to focus on simplifying and clarifying the story as well as reducing the number of characters.

So all in all if you have a script to send don't hesitate.
 

Hi guys,

Just want to say I'm really overwhelmed by the response to this and glad I am able to help people with this and a huge thank you.

I am gonna take a bit of a break from script reading for a moment because it has exceeded all expectations and not leaving a lot of time for writing of my own.

I will definitly return to it and gonna set up a website and everything as I enjoy it so much *COUGH* to any industry people reading... hehe...

Just want to say anyone who has scripts with me currently I WILL of course read them and endevour to have them back within 2 weeks.

Thanks again, you guys have been amazing.

Danny
 

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Yeah well done Danny. It's a lot harder reading scripts and giving people good feedback than it is to write a script I reckon!

So thanks again and best of luck with the writing and the script doctoring!

Marc
 

Yes - Danny. Well done.

Maybe you should make a nominal charge although it could possibly get complicated.

But if you're doing this for people you want to get something out of it.
 

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My thanks also to Danny - he said lots of nice things and pointed out a couple of schoolboy errors. I feel far more encouraged having a stranger read my work and seem to approve over friends and family (who will just say nice things for fear of me hitting them), cheers Danny!
 

I had Danny look at my script and he also provided excellent feedback. Also got back to me within a few days! Well worth using.

Also used Dave Cohen, who was excellent and well worth the investment.

As someone else mentioned it's great to get unbiased feedback.
 

Yes, I'll second Dave Cohen as a script reader, he does a great job.
 

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Danny's done me a good job too. Well worth it. Cheers, Dan

Dan