As the entire Jackson clan is practically bankrupt, I'd have played with that a little more, with the promoter trying to reason the cost of the stage show and the other Jackson's trying to get in on the act.
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swerytd
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March 9, 2009, 2:44 PM GMT
Hey ShoePie
Feels a bit long. I think you need to find one aspect of the show and stick to that as it feels a bit all over the place at the moment.