Close
Devil's Blurb The Next Stage
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
Building on the weaknessess we had in the last I'm opening the floor now to people 's thought on doing a new episode. We will be opening for people to join the writing team again of course so any one intrested PM or pop you name down here.
But lets pitch some story ideas for the next episode think mid season character realtionship established etc.
Ok Go, go, go!!
I'm going to leave this one open til next weekend we should have a good collection of ideas and would of been able to ounce ideas by then.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, earman2009 said:
I mentioned this in the initial ideas session. What happens when the accidentally take the wrong soul? 
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
What would happen?
Would they have to return the soul without Elza or Chris finding out? or try and cover up they've taken the wrong person?
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Charley said:
Right count me in for next eppy defo.
Like the idea of them taking the wrong soul. Also maybe a flashback of how Dev got into it all.
Catherine needs to be the twist I think. We mentioned before about a paperwork mix up that has caused her to be there, or maybe she is really 'The Devil' himself. We need a few cliffhangers see.
We need to bare in mind that this can be quite dark if we want it to be. Maybe Dev is back to go after someone in specific.
The first eppy was light & cool. Maybe we could darken it up a bit. I read somewhere that viewers watch 2 episodes on average before deciding whether to bother again.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, David Chapman said:
OK - I did get a bit confused with the story line for part 1. If you want me I'll have a go.
Did we explain exactly what Chris was doing? Maybe he misread a job advert.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, earman2009 said:
Quote: Gavin @ July 29, 2007, 2:44 PMWhat would happen?
Would they have to return the soul without Elza or Chris finding out? or try and cover up they've taken the wrong person?
View original
To be honest, I never really thought the idea through in the slightest and have no idea what would happen, but yeah they could try to cover up that they've taken the wrong person and then try and return the soul without Elza or Chris finding out. There's also the person's friends and family on earth. How do they cope with the person missing? How do they react when the person comes back? What if the person comes back during the funeral?
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, chipolata said:
If you've written one episode, why write another? Why not try to sell this one first? Or at least test the water with it?
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
In my experience with group the first episode just is a test so the group can really get to know each other normally the next one should be alot better, as we now know each others strengths and weaknesses
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, earman2009 said:
Quote: Gavin @ July 30, 2007, 11:09 AMIn my experience with group the first episode just is a test so the group can really get to know each other normally the next one should be alot better, as we now know each others strengths and weaknesses
View original
Exactly right. That's why I really want to write another one. I think t could be really good!
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Charley said:
Me too. I want to do another epy.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
Ok so so far we have taking the wrong soul.
1, whos do they take, whos were they meant to take.
2, what happens if it isnt a persons time if their taken.
In my opinion I think they should be in Limbo and hang around with Dev and Cat and they keep having to hide him something like that?
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, earman2009 said:
Maybe they were meant to take someone important or famous, so when they're in limbo this person is treated better than everyone else or something like that. Maybe they do take someone important or famous and have to try and bring that person back to earth without the newspapers finding out or something. Not really thought through, but it's an idea.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Charley said:
How about they accidently take the soul of a priest. Maybe the origional soul take was for his twin brother.
God can make an appearance then.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, earman2009 said:
Right. Let's see if we can get this rolling again. I like the priest soul taking idea. Who else wants to kick start this project or am I the only one?
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
Its completely lost momentum/ members.
we need to draft new guys in. So any one intrested pm me.
as for idea why not a priests brother? then we can pit chris vs Dev??
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Charley said:
Woo Cool idea.
I really want us to do another epy.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, David Chapman said:
I'll have a go again if you want me to. You'll have to explain it all to me though cos I'ma bit thick and got confused last time.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Charley said:
Thats because you is, ancient years old Dave!!!!
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, David Chapman said:
yep
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, earman2009 said:
I'm glad this is isn't completely dead.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, earman2009 said:
So, who's on board for this then? Are we recruiting new members so to speak?
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
Right its time to get this project back on track I'll close this thread and start an new one. Lets revitalise this project.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Charley said:
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooooo!
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
Just seen this:
Reaper
Throughout Sam's life, he always wondered why his mom and dad were so easy on him. Whether it was sports, school, career choices, or picking on his little brother Keith, Sam always got away with everything. Because of it, he decided to drop out of college and take a dead beat job, wasting most of his time playing video games and wishing he could ask his co-worker Andi out. However, everything changes in Sam's life once he turns 21 and finds out the reason his parents let him get over was because they sold his soul to the devil before he was born.
Satan explains to Sam that he must serve as his bounty hunter, tracking down souls that have escaped from Hell. Initially, Sam refuses to accept his fate but he realizes the grave consequences of breaking a deal with the devil. He is armed with various vessels to collect the escapees. Sam finds that the work is dangerous and frightening even with the goof ball help of his friends and fellow slackers Sock and Ben, and Sock's former girlfriend, Josie. As bizarre as his life becomes, Sam feels good about his newfound "missions", removing evil souls from the world and sending them back to where they belong. Along with his friends and his vessel of the week, Sam prepares to face his destiny as the "reaper".
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Frankie Rage said:
Sounds a bit Buffy-ish and glossy and.. American, aghhhhh!!!
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Leevil said:
I'd really like to be part of a project, but to be honest, I'm really not keen on the idea being used. I haven't yet read the script though, so could someone please point me in the direction of the completed script.
Thanks 
(I feel like a cheeky bastard saying that, sorry)
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, earman2009 said:
Quote: Gavin @ September 21, 2007, 2:33 PMJust seen this:
Reaper
Throughout Sam's life, he always wondered why his mom and dad were so easy on him. Whether it was sports, school, career choices, or picking on his little brother Keith, Sam always got away with everything. Because of it, he decided to drop out of college and take a dead beat job, wasting most of his time playing video games and wishing he could ask his co-worker Andi out. However, everything changes in Sam's life once he turns 21 and finds out the reason his parents let him get over was because they sold his soul to the devil before he was born.
Satan explains to Sam that he must serve as his bounty hunter, tracking down souls that have escaped from Hell. Initially, Sam refuses to accept his fate but he realizes the grave consequences of breaking a deal with the devil. He is armed with various vessels to collect the escapees. Sam finds that the work is dangerous and frightening even with the goof ball help of his friends and fellow slackers Sock and Ben, and Sock's former girlfriend, Josie. As bizarre as his life becomes, Sam feels good about his newfound "missions", removing evil souls from the world and sending them back to where they belong. Along with his friends and his vessel of the week, Sam prepares to face his destiny as the "reaper".
View original
Definitely doesn't sound like a sitcom anyway. It's diferent enough from our project, so there's no reason why we can carry on with this.
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
Good just letting people know whats about there
On Wednesday 31st December 1969 GMT at 7:00 PM GMT, Gavin said:
Closed
Ref the new thread