Hi, I'm new. Was just having a little look at the critique forum. It is very scary.
 

It's like a zoo - Please don't feed their egos.

And Hiya
 

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Quipped Leevil.
 

I noticed that Luka and hi there.
 

 

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Aaron
BSG Forums & DVDs Editor
(Half man, half Internet, half TV.)
(Loyal follower of The Magical Aura of Laura.)

 

Hello Luka!

Welcome to the forums!
 

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Conspiracy theorist.

"Every joke is a tiny revolution," thought George Orwell. "Whatever destroys dignity, and brings down the mighty from their seats, preferably with a bump, is funny."
 

Hi Luka... we're not that bad in critque, really!
 

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"My body is a temple, it's just my temple happens to have a fully stocked bar and a KFC" - Paul Watson

Resident Cool Geek.
 

Hello, hello! Well I got a couple of sketches - but I'm chicken. Maybe I should get drunk first and then post. lol
 

That's what I did...
 

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Conspiracy theorist.

"Every joke is a tiny revolution," thought George Orwell. "Whatever destroys dignity, and brings down the mighty from their seats, preferably with a bump, is funny."
 

Quote: EllieJP @ April 23 2008, 2:46 PM BST

That's what I did...

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But not when posting sketches

Quote: Luka @ April 23 2008, 2:42 PM BST

Hello, hello! Well I got a couple of sketches - but I'm chicken. Maybe I should get drunk first and then post. lol

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Upto you whether you want to post but youo want an honest opinion... best place for it to be honest.
 

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"My body is a temple, it's just my temple happens to have a fully stocked bar and a KFC" - Paul Watson

Resident Cool Geek.
 

Hey Luka!
 

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"Where were you at the time of the murder Reverend Green?" "I was in the library with Miss Scarlett...and a rope..."
"But he doesn't understand, Irwin *does* like him. He seldom looks at anyone else...Because nor do I. Our eyes meet looking at Dakin!"

~Girlie Pirate~ Proudly number 2 in "Guys and Girlie Pirates"
 

Hello and welcome

Critique can be very useful for an honest opinion, and there are some good, experienced writers here. If it's good they'll say it's good, and the other one too (hopefully in a helpful way).
 

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I'm not going to sit on his face! He wouldn't let me, for a start... - Robyn, BSG

A forum for novelists, short story writers, poets, playwrights etc. Feel free to join in!
The Writers' Lodge
 

Hello Luka.

Do you live on the second floor?
 

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Playwrite extraordinaire.

http://www.eols.org.uk/
 

I was waiting, and he didn't let us down. Well done Mr C.

And hello Luka.
 

Quote: David Chapman @ April 24 2008, 1:30 AM BST

Hello Luka.

Do you live on the second floor?

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Yes, I live upstairs from you. I think you have seen me before?

But seriously my name is Luka because I'm a fan of Simon Pegg and I am a girl. lol hence luka and not luke.
 

Oo, a girlie. We don't get many of them round these 'ere parts. I'll try and stop the others from prodding and examining you.


Err, I should mention, I won't do that myself either. I'm weird, but not sick.


Errr... Not to say that you're not prod-able. But erm. *shuffles off quietly and pretends that nothing was ever said*


So, favourite pizza topping?
 

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Aaron
BSG Forums & DVDs Editor
(Half man, half Internet, half TV.)
(Loyal follower of The Magical Aura of Laura.)